BR 1-09

Red Planet

Three boys travel to space. Of course, this is a story of image.

They ride a space shuttle with the casual wear. There is the shuttle in a boy’s garden for some reason, and they go forth. A boy can operate the shuttle in spite of first time. They float in the air for zero gravity. They enjoy it.
Shortly afterwards, they arrived astral body like Mars, and they fall on a big hole. Then there are many so-call aliens like octopuses. They are helped by the wisdom of the aliens, and they go back their home.

This story does not have a punch line and interesting scenes. I was bored with the story. I want author to set clear scenes.

(121 words)


Roderick, H. (2003). Red Planet. : OXFORD university press.