Welcome to My Portfolios Page!
Revised by: 09108
Date: 2011.01.09
I recorded my work in Writing III class here. In the top table, I showed the number of words, paragraphs graphics and comments on my blog. I showed about essays in the second table, and about book reviews in the third table.The first half is them of the spring semester, and the last half is them of the fall semester.
0.0. Proto-Portfolios
Reflections on Proto-Portfolios
I didn’t devise my blog, but, in contrast, I came to use many graphics now.I came to be can write faster than before. And I can type more number of words.
2.0. 2nd Semester Portfolio
There are two contents on the below. The first is an essay showcase. The second is a book review showcase. I showed the number of words, paragraphs, graphics and comments etc. of essays and book reviews on the showcases. Moreover, I selected my best writings each other and commented about them.
2.1. Essay Showcase
Best Essay
I selected the Essay 2-03b “Students Now and Then” as my best essay from 2nd semester, because I think that I could organize well. I compared student lives between now and future, and arranged the paragraphs in proper sequence. Moreover, I improved the essay after I got peer’s comments. I added some topics in reference to the comment’s matters.Link: Essay 2-03b "Student Now and Then"
Overall Essay Developments
First, I came to be able to write many words in short time. Therefore, my writing became longer and variety. Second, I came to make many paragraphs. I wasn’t careful about how to make paragraphs until this semester, but I think about easy-to-read writings. Finally, I tried to make catchy titles. I think that those are important for readers.2.2. Book Review Showcase
Best Book Review
I selected the Book Review 2-03 “Deserts” as my best book review from 2nd semester, because I think that I could organize well. I wrote about fascinations of deserts on the first half. And I wrote about a problem of desertification on the last half. On those paragraphs, I explained the fact of deserts with my opinions. Moreover, I added two pictures. I think that pictures are an important element for easy-to-read.Link: Book Review 2-03 "Deserts"
Overall Book Review Developments
It had taken me long time to read books and write reviews until this semester. But now, I can read and write speedy as compared with the spring semester. Moreover, I’m careful about paragraphs. I wrote texts with uniformity in the past. I make paragraphs every topic.2.3. Additional Highlights and Reflections
I think that the form of “blog” is an important element for my writing this year. Blog is difference from usual texts on paper. I have to make easy-to-read pages for readers. I must not only write recognizable sentences, but also format text. I set up to white background, and create my own color-coding. You can see their change at two links.I just showed by a run of the item on "the first outline", but I showed with some marks on "the second outline".
Moreover, I came to be can write more words quickly. I had written fewer words at the first. You can see their visual change at next links.
Link: Spring sem. → Fall sem.
I took about same time to write them.
And I came to use computer well.
Link: Spring sem. → Fall sem.
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1.0. 1st Semester Portfolio
I showed the monthly number of words, paragraphs, graphics and comments on my blog in the top showcase.1.1. Essay Showcase
Best Essay
My best essay is “1-02b: COMME des GARCONS”. I wrote about my favorite fashion brand. I think that I could organize well. My class mates gave me more comments in this essay. And I could write the most words. That is the reasons why I choose it.Title: 1-02b COMME des GARCONS
URL: http://nonomimizu.blogspot.com/2010/05/essay-1-02b-comme-des-galcons.html
Overall Essay Developments
I memorized that I must make some paragraphs.
I came to be can upload graphics and medias through the essays.
1.2. Book Review Showcase
Best Book Review
My best book review is “BR 1-13 How to draw yourself”. I am interested in the child’s face. I think I understood the contests of the book, and I could explain out how to draw faces. I tried to draw myself at the last. I think I could summarize the book.
That is the reasons why I choose it.
Title: BR 1-13 How to draw yourself
URL: http://nonomimizu.blogspot.com/2010/06/br-1-13.html
Overall Book Review Developments
I had written fewer words at the first, but I came to be can write more words quickly.
I did not explain the plot of books, but, in contrast, I write the outline on the top for readers.
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